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you tend to speak to mannequins
treating them like equals
breathing flesh and blood
I find that abnormal
men conversing with dolls seem
quite disturbed.
don’t you agree?

dummies, unable to respond
with barbie blue eyes
and a body made of plastic
your hand won’t sink in
to manufactured skin
the surface is smooth
but artificial

you should stop speaking to mannequins
the kindness goes unnoticed
people might think of you as…crazy

with their grayish fantasies
normal as they are

they do not understand
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But maybe it's more common than people would think.

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:iconsempiterna:
This is a very interesting piece, I don't quite get what it's about but it's written and worded really well

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Somewhat cryptically written, then? Thank you for your comment :)

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:iconsempiterna:
either that or I'm just missing the obvious :)

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not at all

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And the soul outwears the breast,
And the heart must pause to breath

-George Gordon Byron

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